'Bell Rings', "Finally, Summer vacation has started" Liat said. I was really just excited because I didn't have to listen to the kids that bullied me everyday but, I would also rather be at school then with my annoying Aunt Pam and Uncle George. My parents died in a car crash a couple of years ago, that's why I'm stuck with them. I was really looking forward to a boring summer full of books, books, and more books. I love to read, but wish I didn't. I wish I could have many friends of my own, but can't. The good news was that my 16th birthday was tomorrow.
     It's my birthday, and I'm sure Aunt Pam and Uncle George have some weird plan coming my way, Sweet. I'm sure all the girls at my school look forward to shopping with friends on their birthday or having huge parties. Me? I'm looking forward to reading.
     "LIAT!" Aunt Pam shrieked
     "Coming." I moaned.
     "Good morning pumpkin, happy birthday my sweet little angel."
     Gosh she is so obnoxious. I thought to myself.
     "Thanks Aunt Pam."
     "You are such a big girl now!" Grabbing my cheeks like i was a baby again.
     I love Aunt Pam and all, but she says that same exact thing every year.
     "Uncle George and I have a big suprise coming your way later".
     I don't get it my mother (Pam's Sister) was not even as close to annoying as Aunt Pam. Aunt Pam's idea of a big suprise is probably going to Kansas to play in some mud with my redneck cousins.
     Listening to Uncle George's stupid stories about the animals he hunts happened every night. Why? Because he was diagnosed with a disease. 5 years ago when my parents died , he got a call saying that my parents had got hit by a car and he had a stroke and from then till now he does the same thing everyday.
     After we had chocolate cake with a lining of mocha frosting in the inside covered in huge chocolate strawberries. I picked up my pink polka-dot wrapped present and shook it. It felt like there was nothing in there. I unwrapped the box took off the lid and there was..A plane ticket? What?
     "What's this?" I asked.
     "Oh honey, I knew how much you have always wanted to go there ever since you were a little girl."
     "Gee thanks." I said.
     Now I have to pack my bags and leave first thing tomorrow morning. I am not going to get any sleep, but on second thought this could be fun.
     'Beep,Beep,Beep' I hit the snooze button.
     "Liat! Get up sweetie, we should get to the airport soon!"
     I said goodbye to Aunt Pam and Uncle George, and it was time to catch my flight.
     I got on the plane and everyone was waiting on me hand and foot. I think they thought i was like famous? No what am i thinking. Why am I the only person on this plane?
     When i stepped off the plane I could smell the fried dough and I knew, I was in Time Square.
     As I walked around there was no one around besides opened stores, cars crashed into fire hydrants, The "Biebs" tour bus, and fried dough stands. I thought to myself I have seen a movie like this before.."I am legend" starring Will Smith. That's it.
     For some strange reason I feel welcome here. I mean there is no one around but that's good for me. At home, my town is so small that everyone knows everybody's business. Everyone laughs at me because my clothes are to small for me or they aren't designer. Here it's different.
     Still this is weird, my cell phone isn't working, I'm all alone, and I don't even know how to get back to the airport. "Oh well hello Marc Jacobs!"
     I'm not necessarily rebellious but I can't believe I'm about to steal this $1,000 Marc by Marc Jacobs summer collection sun dress! No i can't. Well i can always just put it back before anyone notices.
     This dress was beautiful. I'm positive that Taylor Swift has the same exact dress. I saw it in Ok! magezine 2 days ago. I could get used to this.
     I went to a hair salon and did my own hair, then went to MAC cosmetics and did my own makeup. Wow if the kids at home could see me now they would think I was the new Kim Kardashian. Speaking of Kim Kardashian, when i went to Soho i went to there store and stole the KK perfume.
     I really miss home even thought home probably doesn't miss me, I just really want to go home.
     After days of sleeping in Jordan's furniture, I heard someone.
     "Hello!"
     "Hello." I responded. It kind of sounded like my Uncle George. "Uncle George!" I called.
     "Liat is that you!"
     "Yes, Uncle George it is me!" He came to save me, I always knew I liked him better than Aunt Pam.
     'Beep,Beep,Beep! I hit the snooze button. "Liat, get up sweetie your flight leaves in three hours" Aunt Pam said.
     Was I seriously dreaming?

  

1st paragraph

'Bell Rings', "Finally, Summer vacation has started" Liat said. I was really just excited because I didn't have to listen to the kids that bullied me everyday but, I would also rather be at school then with my annoying Aunt Pam and Uncle George. I was really looking forward to a boring summer full of books, books, and more books. I loved to read, but wish I didn't. I wished I had many friends of my own, but didn't. The good news was that my birthday was tomorrow. Every year Aunt Pam and Uncle George forget about it though. Its okay though I'm used to it.

Small town girl's adventure

Her name was Liat. She was from a small town called Little Rock. She was raised by her Aunt Pam and
Uncle George. Liat's parents passed away when she was very little, around 1. Liat wants to adventure the world. Aunt Pam and Uncle George planned for her 16 birthday to go to New York. Liat was so excited for this adventure, but will she be excited when she gets to an abandoned place where it's just her?